Ms. McGroarty's twin sister helped me with my final project today. Following the idea which came up by Ms McGroarty, Ms McGroarty's twin sister concreted my idea. First of all, she and me found out a bunch of women on campus with different occupations; and then, she and me figured out what are best questions to ask during the interview; and after that, she proofread the email I am going to send to those women.
I went to the dinning hall and scheduled a time with one women who is not appeared on the Madeira faculty list. Also, I interviewed Ms. Walker at the end of the class. Of those women who I sent email to, Ms Herridge and Ms French have already replied me and schedule a perfect time which work for us. I hope I can finish the final project on time.
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I finished my three main body paragraph in the situation which I don't have a complete research question and thesis statement. After talking to Ms McGroarty, I know it is not right to do this. I will consolidate my research question and thesis statement next time before I write anything.
We had class today. I didn't have a chance to give Ms McGroarty read my newly revised outline. I have some problem with my research question. I wanted to change (rephrase) my research question from "Since the 1970s, how do women's occupational preferences impact their physical and mental health?" into " Since the 1970s, what is the major reason for American women to become unhealthy and how do they related to women's job."
I had a conference with Ms McGroarty today about my outline. There are two main problems exist in my outline. First of all, most of my topic sentence are not relate to my research question. Secondly, there are tons of grammar mistake in it. I have already revised it tonight. I will bring this to class tomorrow.
Horry! We still don't have class today!
I revised my outline today on some grammar mistake. I should have written it in the standard english. I also hope tomorrow we will have class tomorrow. It is still snow day. The outline was due yesterday. I did more research today because by writing the outline yesterday, I found out that I DO need more evidence to support my topic sentences.
We don't have class today. Therefore, I finished writing my outline. i was thinking about dividing the passage into two parts. Introduction, body 1, body 2, and conclusion.
Today I talked to Ms McGroarty about my essay and my final project. First of all, after reading my notecards, I think I need to break down my notecards and reorganized them, discard the ones which I don't need. And then, I need to write an outline about my essay. And finally, I need to finish the essay.
And about the final project. I decided to interview women in our campus with different occupations. First of all, I need to make some questions to ask those different women. And then, I have to send emails to them and do the interviews. And finally, I need to edit those Videos together and finish my final project. |
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