I finished three body paragraphs today in class. I learned that the parentheses need to be added after every sentence I quote. I only used two different resources in my second body paragraph. I found another resource that is related to the topic of my second body paragraph by the end of class and made a notecard of it in order to add it to my second paragraph.
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We start to work on our three body paragraphs today. I have already corrected my topic sentences yesterday. It is really easy to write my body paragraphs with the outline I created before. I finished one and half paragraph in class. I have also learned how to include the information of resources in my essay.
Today Ms. McGroarty helped me to revise my outline. My topic sentences of each paragraph have many mistakes, so I need to correct them. I need to remember that adverbs always go with verbs, but not nouns.
I start to think about my infographic today. Since I need to include some charts and statistics to help my readers understand the information, so I make two more notecards with many detailed statistics in it.
Statistics
1. Over 1 million children in the United States experience parental divorce annually. 2.Although most children adapt well to this transition, approximately 20% to 25% develop mental health or adjustment problems-twice the rate experienced by children from continuously married families. 3. There are about 25% children living with only one parent in the United States.
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